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January 03, 2009 08:47 PST
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Geisha

  by Desiree Neace
When I think of calm, I think of being outside and the wind blowing. So this kind of captures that feeling that I embrace when I've had a hard day or just need to ground myself.
Geisha (Version 2)

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On January 03, 2009 @ 15:51 sandrina said:

too simple needs more depth to set a mood

On January 05, 2009 @ 12:22 abbienormal said:

i think the character is tight, but the background is too simple.

On January 05, 2009 @ 17:53 shia93 said:

you should add more to the background, otherwise its beautiful

On January 05, 2009 @ 18:04 yaoi-fied / design author said:

i have tried to add some textures to it but i haven't found the right ones yet. any suggestions?

On January 06, 2009 @ 10:25 abbienormal said:

maybe something with intense stylistic contrast like a black and white photographic sky.

On January 06, 2009 @ 11:09 joey said:

I think scanning in some Japanese washi paper could look really beautiful. Check it out here: http://www.plasticbamboo.com/2007/01/14/sunday-snapshot-rolls-of-washi/

On January 10, 2010 @ 11:05 legacyofwords said:

Geisha is good, though you only need the one in the foreground. Maybe simplify background by getting rid of her silhouette and coloring background just slightly with mostly desaturated or gray-ISH colors (possibly add light pink cherry blossoms to tree, muted grayish-green hills, pink that is SLIGHTLY [like, maybe one shade] more intense than the blossoms for the falling petals, etc., etc. ...) It's awesome, just needs a little work in the background.

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