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October 06, 2009 10:19 PST
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Ada Jane

  by LollyRot
This is my very first attempt at an iPhone design so any suggestions for elaborating on my current design would be greatly appreciated :)
Ada Jane (Version 2)

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On October 07, 2009 @ 09:33 ddd said:

i'd make some adjustments to the various line widths of your elements - especially the girl. the lines themselves need to have a little more personality through tapering, different widths, etc.

i see you've started to do this, but i'd think about taking it a step further and really committing to your linework to give it a little more life and character.

On October 08, 2009 @ 12:28 iwakami said:

it looks like a good concept, but you need to adjust/think more about the final art. the background gradient does not help much

On October 08, 2009 @ 15:52 Chertezhniko said:

I like it. Add more details to the face

On December 21, 2010 @ 04:04 jagrogan said:

more zombie stuff? If that kind of stuff really sells that your design is fine, even pretty, if you can say that considering the subject matter I find so unpleasing.

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