Almost There!

This is a very cute and kind of scary design, I think that the idea is great! Maybe the story would come across a bit more clearly if the top fish's skeleton was showing? The two images may also relate to one another a bit more if you added something in the middle of the shirt ti integrate them, more bubbles etc..

It took me a second to get this one, but when I did I completely cracked up. I love it! I agree with the above comment about adding a little bit of skeleton to the top fish, so the situation reads a little faster. I would buy this shirt. Great idea!

Please don't take this the wrong way, but I prefer the style in the backdrop over the one on the tee. It also took me a while to get it. Clever concept but it looked like a jewel on first glance

I think the shapes in this design are really appealing and cute. I'd wear this shirt because it has a funny and short story.

I think if you were to implement the dead fish's skeleton it might seem like Hannibowl cut out a piece of him after he started to already rot because he's holding the goods in his hands now.

I was thinking... since the cut out piece of fish is so perfect in shape like a rectangle, that Hannibowl probably cut him up with a sharp tool like a scalpel. Hannibal would use scalpels. Maybe having Hannibowl hold a scalpel will read more clearly and say what's going on faster.

One last thing! The dead fish looks like a fish, just by its silhouette, but Hannibowl seems slightly like a bowling pin because we can't see the tail/fin portion of his body. You think there's a way to show us that. Maybe that's what Joey meant *shrug*.

Best of luck, it's very promising.

NICE...

BWAHAHA! I LOVE IT!!!

Cannibalism, even for children's cartoon goldfish isn't my cup of tea. Sorry.