Almost There!

love the sketch, maybe spice it up with some vector work?

I think once this has color and tight, crisp lines (perhaps vector, like the above poster said) it will be really good!

Bottom one looks like spongebob :)

Nice, maybe the legs of the machine could be a little less static?

Great idea but the legs do take away from the image. Perhaps a redraw where the toaster is planted in the ground like a plant?

what the hell is your problem with pop-tarts?

Nice that's nice :)