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Medula Oblongata
by Evan EchitoI came up with this after watching the opening scene to Fight Club. Mostly photo manipulation.





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i noticed a few errors in the first version after i submitted it. way to go me.
i think the concept is really cool. I don't know if it is the web image or the desing, but it feels like it could be tighter, crisper and really make the neurons pop. maybe even adding more intricacy and depth
web doesn't do it much justice. i think i'm going to revamp the design completely. i'm not real happy about the color balance.
it has potential...
I like the choice of colors, maybe use some lighting affects for more contrast...I've alway liked this type of art keep going.
Interesting concept. Lovely pattern effect, the turquoise stand out a little too much for me though
I agree with Dodies on the turquoise (maybe desaturate JUST the turquoise), and that it's a good concept (agreeing with pseudotim)...
Are the straight lines supposed to be there, or is that what you were talking about with the web thing not doing it justice?
Love the concept. Continue working. Get it critiqued. Then, submit it! (I would buy this design with a tad of work!)
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